I shrugged it off at first because I thought it was just a couple of flukes in the first updates but there seems to be an awful lot of weird choices of words and small “grammar mistakes” in this vn. I bring this up only because personally I found that this last update (0.3.0e) felt hard to read because of this.
Take these lines for example (all back to back btw):
“Under the coat hid clothes that looked more like ordinary everyday clothes, and still looked quite human-like.”
“Her face is so calm and pleasant that it even seemed familiar to me, to some person from the Earth.”
“But most likely it just seems.”
“What can be noted from the atypical is a different color for each eye. But the shade was not entirely clear, as her glasses also had a color close to her hair color.”
Like, I understand what it says but it’s still very weird to read, and there’s a lot of this kind of stuff. I’m not one to care much for “grammatical errors” and such (because, like, descriptivism and stuff, you know?) but these are the kind that make things a bit unpleasant to read.
(Don’t get me wrong, I like this vn and wrote this comment as feedback, I don’t want it to come across like this was written as an insult to the team behind this vn or anything like that, far from it, I find putting the effort into making a vn and making it free for people to play incredibly cool of y’all)
oh, I'm actually looking for people who could help me with editing the text, even if a payment is required, since I translate a novel myself, being a writer, having an average level of English
could you help? if yes, please write me: telegram - @dimmmli discord - Pumpy_Neil#1663
I am also very invested in this VN, but I found it hard to read, but if you want, I could maybe help you out on some of the translations. I'm not a Russian speaker or anything, nor am I a writer of some sort, but I would like to help you out, so people can read your novel without any problem. I'll send you a friend request on discord, so we can talk about this more in privat.
I don 't know why - but the error is in the itch.io , I didn't change anything, but just uploaded the builds by Googl drive to this site, not directly, and everything worked... weird as f...
I’m personally a fan of YYYY/MM/DD since that way sorting “alphabetically” (even tho it’s numbers, but you get it) or by date is functionally the same (when using 0s as filler, so 2021/09/20)
Since it said there will be NSFW art in the future im just wondering will it be man/woman or man/man or route? im about to play the game so just thought i would ask
We plan to add both content, but m/m will have an advantage in the amount of 80% by 20% (f/f will not be)
But - the game has a choice of the orientation of the main character, which will allow you to avoid mandatory scenes, phrases and dialogues that are not inherent in this orientation
We hope that everyone will feel comfortable playing
this is what I get when I try to load my last saves... And if I press ROLLBACK, it kicks me out of the game? If I press OPEN, it sends me a TXT file which I don't understand. If I press IGNORE, it resets the game to the start, and I have to redo everything I did so far.... What do I do? Do I keep playing the game and get back to where I was or?
Sometimes saves may not work in new updates - because some variables in the game code change, not just the text - then you have to scroll through again
But there is also a useful "skip" button that is configured in the settings (skip "unseen text")
Хэй, приветик, мне понравилась ваша игра, по сюжету я думал, что это типа FBTW, но это мнение сразу поменялось, как только мы узнали, что наш ГГ - лис. Сюжет развивается довольно активно и за это короткое время я уже успел удивится этой игрой. Я заметил пару недочетов, которые не помешали мне пройти дальше, но все же это было маленько неприятно:
1. Игра отказывается устанавливаться в официальном приложении itch, мне пришлось скачивать через браузер и запускать не через лаунчер (может, это только у меня ошибка такая).
2. Не все фразы имеют русский язык, для меня это было странно, но мне, как я уже говорил, не помешало понять смысл слов.
Пожелания: я надеюсь, вы не перестанете разрабатывать игру, так как мне она очень сильно понравилась, удачи вам!
Soul transplantation... always interesting, an abrupt approach rather than a gradual one like transformation, but stands to give way to so many other possibilities.
Really liked how the main character was written. His panicked state felt quite believable. The art is good, Hercule having so many expressions was a really nice touch. Just wish the main menu had artwork as well. I hope you'll find an editor for the English version, because that's something the novel could benefit from.
I still feel like you should go back to/redo Time to Decide, but that can always wait. I suppose given the long stretch of nothing, only made sense to refocus on starting something anew. I'm too curious to not try this one!
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I shrugged it off at first because I thought it was just a couple of flukes in the first updates but there seems to be an awful lot of weird choices of words and small “grammar mistakes” in this vn. I bring this up only because personally I found that this last update (0.3.0e) felt hard to read because of this.
Take these lines for example (all back to back btw):
Like, I understand what it says but it’s still very weird to read, and there’s a lot of this kind of stuff. I’m not one to care much for “grammatical errors” and such (because, like, descriptivism and stuff, you know?) but these are the kind that make things a bit unpleasant to read.
(Don’t get me wrong, I like this vn and wrote this comment as feedback, I don’t want it to come across like this was written as an insult to the team behind this vn or anything like that, far from it, I find putting the effort into making a vn and making it free for people to play incredibly cool of y’all)
oh, I'm actually looking for people who could help me with editing the text, even if a payment is required, since I translate a novel myself, being a writer, having an average level of English
could you help? if yes, please write me:
telegram - @dimmmli
discord - Pumpy_Neil#1663
Anyone (；ω；)
I am also very invested in this VN, but I found it hard to read, but if you want, I could maybe help you out on some of the translations. I'm not a Russian speaker or anything, nor am I a writer of some sort, but I would like to help you out, so people can read your novel without any problem. I'll send you a friend request on discord, so we can talk about this more in privat.
Ho Damn! Qunit's sprite wow! Balanced between large yet soft sort of textured design! And just like that cliffhanger! Darn!
0.3.0e finally work
yey ^^
Same! Wonder what the issue was... but happy to have double checked itch! I can't stop scratching that itch! XP
I don 't know why - but the error is in the itch.io , I didn't change anything, but just uploaded the builds by Googl drive to this site, not directly, and everything worked...
weird as f...
Flirtatious shark, a little too dominant for my taste. Would date if the MC gets to top him, 8/10
Please tell me that Quint Is/ or will be dateble
I love you guys! (and girls in this case)
WHOOOO YEAAAAH BABY THIS IS WHAT IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS IS WHAT ITS ALL ABOUT WHOOOO
When the next update is coming? I'm excited ^^
Ayo! Im waitin and excited for the next part.
same
Проект "
умер"?нет, мы занимаемся сборкой, скорее всего она выйдет 9-го числа, но не публикуеем даты так как боимся снова прошляпиться
ubdates ?
how many time before next update?
If I understood correctly 0.3.0 should go public when 0.4.0 will be released for Patreons.
That should be about a week or more after they get 0.3.5, which was announced to be delayed on september 24th.
So next public update probably late october or early november
Please dont take this the wrong way but, is this VN still alive?
lol yes :D
just big delays with the publication this month
Is 20.9.2021 Where's the Update??
I dead ass sat here confused af about the 20th month lol
not all countrys have the same date set the 20 is day and the 9 is month that is wh
"20 is day and the 9 is month that is wh" - ummmm, plz clarify
its like i replacet the places with the month and day
20 9 2021 You have it Like this
DD MM YY 9 20 2021
MM DD YY
I’m personally a fan of YYYY/MM/DD since that way sorting “alphabetically” (even tho it’s numbers, but you get it) or by date is functionally the same (when using 0s as filler, so 2021/09/20)
Temporary problems with publishing. we are trying to fix them
sry
its good it has the Option if ur gay straight or By sexual when ur in the Shower Cuz well Am straight i like women Not men
Since it said there will be NSFW art in the future im just wondering will it be man/woman or man/man or route? im about to play the game so just thought i would ask
We plan to add both content, but m/m will have an advantage in the amount of 80% by 20% (f/f will not be)
But - the game has a choice of the orientation of the main character, which will allow you to avoid mandatory scenes, phrases and dialogues that are not inherent in this orientation
We hope that everyone will feel comfortable playing
I mean... wow
Wait is the 2.0 update here already?
yes, and in about 2 weeks there will be the next one :D
this is what I get when I try to load my last saves... And if I press ROLLBACK, it kicks me out of the game? If I press OPEN, it sends me a TXT file which I don't understand.
If I press IGNORE, it resets the game to the start, and I have to redo everything I did so far.... What do I do? Do I keep playing the game and get back to where I was or?
Nvm everything is good, I fixed it
Sometimes saves may not work in new updates - because some variables in the game code change, not just the text - then you have to scroll through again
But there is also a useful "skip" button that is configured in the settings (skip "unseen text")
omg yay :0
:D
:ᴅ
We apologize for another "postponed" - we want to make a high-quality release, and we need a bit more time
Take all the time you need.
_YES_
Thank you for another update :D
finally some good f*cking game. I want this game to be updated tho. it is really good
So far this game looks very well made. Interested in seeing more
really wish i had any money to support you on patreon! this looks really really promising!!
cool
cул новый update
:O
Wow, this looks like a promising start, I’m really looking forward to the next update!
I loved this game, i hope you keep publishing more updates :D
Хэй, приветик, мне понравилась ваша игра, по сюжету я думал, что это типа FBTW, но это мнение сразу поменялось, как только мы узнали, что наш ГГ - лис. Сюжет развивается довольно активно и за это короткое время я уже успел удивится этой игрой. Я заметил пару недочетов, которые не помешали мне пройти дальше, но все же это было маленько неприятно:
1. Игра отказывается устанавливаться в официальном приложении itch, мне пришлось скачивать через браузер и запускать не через лаунчер (может, это только у меня ошибка такая).
2. Не все фразы имеют русский язык, для меня это было странно, но мне, как я уже говорил, не помешало понять смысл слов.
Пожелания: я надеюсь, вы не перестанете разрабатывать игру, так как мне она очень сильно понравилась, удачи вам!
Спасибо за отзыв, да, бэта имеет много ошибок, не переведенных моментов и багов. Мы пофиксим их в следующем апдейте.
PANIC? PANIC! *calms down* *PANIC RISES AGAIN*
Soul transplantation... always interesting, an abrupt approach rather than a gradual one like transformation, but stands to give way to so many other possibilities.
Really liked how the main character was written. His panicked state felt quite believable. The art is good, Hercule having so many expressions was a really nice touch. Just wish the main menu had artwork as well.
I hope you'll find an editor for the English version, because that's something the novel could benefit from.
We are glad to hear :3 and hope you will enjoy further chapters
I still feel like you should go back to/redo Time to Decide, but that can always wait. I suppose given the long stretch of nothing, only made sense to refocus on starting something anew. I'm too curious to not try this one!
"Time to" was abandoned by the main artist and it hit the team hard.
We may come back to it, but we need a breath of fresh air with a game that both the new artist and writer really want to make.
Given that we are so exited by the plot of this game that the writer came up with, the past experience will not be repeated with it
I would only hope so, and I doubt it, and of course Patrons first, but if any trouble coming up with ideas, I can try to help.
Glad to hear it - wait for updates :p
Just to let you know on Android it just opens up to a black screen
Yes, I also got a black screen on one device, but after I closed the game and started it again, everything worked
Maybe this is a problem because of the screen saver
I don't know how to solve it yet >.<
Nice👍
:O